Have you ever sought revenge on
someone? Have you ever thought about taking revenge on someone or dreamed about
it? Peter Houghten had every day, because every day peter was bullied. Ever
since his first day of kindergarten when he got his lunch box tossed out of a
school bus window. Peter has taken every insult, punch, and humiliation without
fighting back. Peter’s life has been constant torment and torture. And when
peter saw an opportunity to get revenge he took it, the reason peter shot
everyone that he did was because he wanted revenge. Peter wanted to get back at
all the people who had ruined his life.
Being bullied will affect anyone’s
life in a very severe way. But being bullied for your whole life can cause a
lot of suffering and pain. Peter has been bullied his entire life. Peter has
been bullied in so many ways, he has been stuffed into lockers, called names,
tripped in the hallways and so much more. But the bullying can often get taken
to a level of physical abuse, and mental abuse that is unbearable for peter.
For example “ he tumbled down the stone steps as matt stood over him. Peter
landed face down on the pavement when he lifted his head his lip was bleeding.
Matt was on peter like a hurricane, punching him in the face, wrestling him
bodily to the ground. Matt spat on him as he pinned him to the ground, peter
shook his head, tears streaming down his face mixing with the blood.” This
quote shows how cruelly peter is treated, and how much these people hurt him.
Peter has never been able to really get back at these people. He had just taken
everything that was thrown at him, and had to deal with it by himself. Being
bullied so harshly had destroyed his life.
Peter had a reason for killing the
people he did, he killed them because he wanted revenge, not because he was
insane or irregularly brutal. Peter had his life ruined by these tormenters and
he wanted to get back at them. The day peter took his revenge he killed
nineteen people. But this shooting wasn’t just out of nowhere, peter had
planned his revenge, peters revenge was pre meditated. Peter took time to steal
four guns. Two from a neighbor and two from his father, peter made his own
bombs, he made a kill list in his yearbook and he made a video game to
virtually kill the kids who had made him suffer. Yes peters massacre wasn’t
justified and it was a horrible thing to do, but peter had a somewhat valid
reason. For eleven years peter had been violated by the same group of people,
he had never gotten a break.
Peter got his vengeance, but it meant
hurting a lot of people in the process. The book teaches readers to be more
aware of what you do and say to people. It teaches readers that what you may
think is a joke is definitely not to someone else. The book also educates readers
on the subject of revenge by showing us that people will not always let you get
away with things.
I enjoyed how you started your story off with a bunch of questions. For your first body paragraph I liked how you made your topic sentence more general to other topics, not just to your book. It keeps the readers engaged. :)
ReplyDeletethis is really well written you had a lot of great elaboration in your paragraphs. good job!
ReplyDeleteThe beginning of your blog when you asked the questions on getting revenge was amazing! It was so intriguing and really wanted to continue reading!! I loved it so so much!!!!
ReplyDeleteYour beginning/hook was very intriguing and it made me think. Great job! :3
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